Thesis+Examples

1. Has the world done anything to prevent september 11th from re accuring? 2. In need of an umbrella // The British Parliament caused the American Revolution // // The colonists grew weary of British enforcement which caused the American Revolution // // The colonists rebellion against British laws caused the American Revolution // 3. The confederate troops joined the war because of idealogical, economical, and political reasons. 5. since sports can be played by any race, it has developed in to a traditional, american culture 6. Al Capone altered everyones life in Chicago. 7. Comparing the 1950s to today, as a society we have regressed moraly. 8. The soldiers of the Civil War, kept on fighting because of the experiences they experienced during the war. 9. Over confidence in the terms of security causes more vulnerability for terrorist attacks. 10. First ladies play a role in goverement that is just as important, if not more important on making our goverement function able and able to work smoothly daily. 11. To this day, the treatment of blacks in athletics is less satisfying than imagined. 12. Although Hitler and FDR are both questionable leader they both did exactly what their countries needed at this time of crisis. 13. Hate groups should not be protected by the constitution and the right of free speech. 14. As a result of numerous dark events in American history that occured during the 1970's, America no longer viewed itself as a major player on the world stage and looked for something to 15. help bring it out of a decade of despair. The Miracle on Ice served as that something 16. The strategies used in World War 2 created a new warfare that altered world safetey forever. 17. Racial segregation failed to make African Americans weaker; it made them stronger. 18. America would not have survived this long as a world power without its use of psychological warfare. 19. The presence of the Mafia in America has hindered the assimilation and advancement of Italians in American society. 20. Michael Jordan's contributions outside of the basketball court have greatly impacted the American society. 21. Chicago's weak government allowed the Mafia to take over in the 20s and 30s.
 * __ The Bad __**
 * HATE LISTS! COME UP WITH SOMETHING THAT ENCOMPASSES ALL THREE! **
 * 4. ** The political and economical events of America during the 1960's started a radical change in the society's social development.
 * TOO GENERAL AND OBVIOUS: WE ALL KNOW THAT THE 1960s CAUSED CHANGE **
 * unclear/direction? **
 * __ The “Just OK” Crew __**
 * Use the word “catalyst” and talk about the change **
 * More important than what?? **
 * __ The Good __**